This Wiki page is designed to collect comments on the second review of the DITA 1.2 specification, 21 September - 3 October 2009. This review is being conducted by members of the OASIS DITA Technical Committee.
Important: Reviewers, be sure to preface comments with your name and the date, for example, [Eberlein, 18 September 2009]
The xNAL domain
[JTH, 29 November 2009] I continue to maintain this as a separate topic because it is unlike the others and requires more descriptions. Incorporated JOgden's changes per email. No links at this point. Need to decide if we want links throughout the spec.
[Hamilton, 13 November 2009]
- It's not clear to me why this is a separate topic. Why not include it with the other Topic domains in the previous topic?
- If you keep this topic, I'd add a link to the part of the spec that describes the xNAL domain.
[JTH, 7 November, 2009] defined CIQ, added hyphen, set scope to external. Last paragraph changed.
[Eberlein, 2 October 2009]
- What does CIQ stand for?
- Change "global customer information management" to "global-customer information management"
[Eberlein, 2 October 2009] For the <xref> to OASIS extensible Name and Address Language (xNAL), set the @scope attribute to external so that the Web page will open in a separate window.
[Eberlein, 2 October 2009] Change last paragraph to read as follows:
"The xNAL domain is part of the bookmap specialization. The xNAL domain elements can appear any place that bookmap allows the <author> element, within <bookmeta> and <topicmeta> elements."
[Eberlein, 2 October 2009] In the general, this topic could benefit from a rewrite to make it clearer and crisper. I'm willing to do this, if it would help.